Monday, November 20, 2006

I want you back

I have been working on this lyric, I am still not satisfied with the structure. I consulted with Nigel but his suggested structure ruining the flow.

My current (original) lyric is as follows,


I Want You Back

Chorus1
I want you to bring back
All your dreams, blue and black
I want you
I want you back
I want you
I want you back

Verse1
It’s strange
We just shared pains
we were wild
& we didn’t tame
each other
Like lovers


Chorus
I want you to bring back
All your dreams, blue and black
I want you
I want you back
I want youI want you back


Verse2
And in this foolish game
Everything seemed fake
Its like we dreamt a dream
while we’re awake
We lived in heaven
and we transgressed


Bridge
But its never late
Its never late
If we learn from mistakes

Chorus
I want you to roll Babe!

Dice of hope for love's sake
I want you
I want you back
I want you
I want you back

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